Tuesday, 10 February 2015

New summer

Have you ever smelled summer?

Well I have

when I went out side of my house.

I smelled a flower so I went closer to the flower.

The flower was pink and yellow.

When I smelled the pink yellow flower

it smelled fresh and beautiful.

Mum called me inside and when I looked away

I heard a buzzing noise

I looked behind me and

saw a bee in the flower getting honey.

3 comments:

  1. Well done on getting your blog underway for 2015. I am looking forward to reading more. Mr A.

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  2. I love the way you have described the smell of the flower as fresh and beautiful. It is unusual to use the word beautiful as a smell, but it seems to work well here. Well done Korey. You have created a picture of that moment for me.

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  3. Great work Korey, I like how you said you smelled a flower and you went closer and when you said your mum called you in and you heard buzz and you saw a bee behind you in the flower

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