Sunday, 17 May 2015

Observational writing

Observational writing 

It looks old because of it’s color greenish brown. It has brown spots and holes around the fern and looks like it’s 100 years old.

It feels crunchy, like you are crumbling the fern into little pieces.

It crackles when you bend it. When you you pick it up and drop it there is no sound. 

I’m pretty sure it smells like nature and dirt. Something 

3 comments:

  1. I like how you putt looks like it's 100 years old


    Blake

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  2. I like how you put looks like it's 100 years old


    Blake

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  3. I like your writing and it is descriptive

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